The Right Way to Encourage Contact in Your Dating Profile
Published on March 8, 2010
I’ve looked at my fair share of online dating profiles and I wanted to talk about one of the bad habits I see in many profiles: the plea for contact. There are many examples of this; some good examples but honestly most of the time when I see someone trying to encourage communication it isn’t done in a good way. Here are some of the more common ways people will attempt this:
- If you decide to contact me, I’m very flattered.
- Please contact me if you would like to chat.
- I hope you decide to send me an email!
There are a few reasons this approach is a bad idea.
Reason 1: You Don’t Want to Appear Desperate
You might not be desperate but often your words will tell another story. Perhaps the wrong story but they still say something. I talk about this in my post Does You Online Dating Profile Say What You Think It Does? In some cases, asking (or even begging) people to contact you might not hurt your profile. However, remember that you are always fighting the bad impressions the people who have come before you have created. If a woman has had to deal with a weird guy or three, she’s going to be on the lookout for anything out of place. If a man earned himself an online stalker he’s going to start taking the same precautions. Having dated online actively, my experience has shown that there are far more normal people than weird. That said, it only takes one bad experience to open our eyes to what could happen on these online dates. After that point, I can guarantee you’ll be under the microscope.
Reason 2: People Know How Online Dating Works
You don’t need to explain to people how to communicate with you. Everyone already knows. The idea that someone looked at your profile, thought you were great and wanted to contact you but just couldn’t figure out how is not happening. “But what if they are nervous about contacting me or shy?” First, simply stating that you invite emails isn’t going to give nervous person courage. Everyone is inviting contact by the virtue of having a dating profile. Second, you can’t write your profile for the minority of people at the risk of driving away the majority. In other words, do everything you can to remove anything questionable from your profile. Including innocent statements that someone else might see as desperation.
Reason 3: Are You Selecting or Being Selected?
A cousin of desperation is low self-esteem. When you word your plea for contact the wrong way you might be telling your potential dates: “I’ll take anyone!” Again, I’m not saying that you have low self-esteem by asking for contact but I would suggest that you might give that impression. Remember: you need to see online dating
Reason 4: You Don’t Need to Prove that You’re Nice
Some people want to include something nice or encouraging in their profile and see including a statement like “I hope you decide to contact me!” as the way to do it. Yes, that is a nice statement but as I’ve shown above it may do more harm than good. Just as you don’t need to prove that you’re funny in your profile, you also don’t need to prove that you’re nice.
A Better Way To Encourage Contact
I believe there are two better approaches to ending your profile. First, not saying anything at all about contacting each other is totally fine. That’s probably the easiest approach as well. As I’ve said in my online dating guide, just coming off as normal can go a long way for your dating profile. Avoiding appearances of desperation or low-self esteem will improve your odds at being contacted.
The second method is more direct and while like the examples at the beginning of this post there is a significant difference. At the end of your profile, describe the type of man or woman you are looking for. After that, a comment stating that a person who fits the bill should be encouraged to contact you is fine. Here’s an example:
The woman I’d like to meet loves to travel. She’s excited to try something new and appreciates my quirkiness. She loves learning and excited to share her experiences with the man in her life. If this sounds like you, feel free to contact me.
But why would this work so much better? Is it really that much different? I think so. In this example, there can be no confusion over desperation or low self-esteem. The point is clear: I’m looking for particulars in the person I date. If that sounds like you, we should talk. If not, I wish you the best of luck. There’s no desperation. There’s no low self-esteem. Not only is it a strong way to encourage contact it actually strengthens your profile as you’re defining some things you’re looking for. Not only will you encourage contact, you’ll encourage contact from those who fit what you’re looking for.
Author: Brad
Brad initially struggled with online dating but over time became quite successful using it. He met his wife using online dating and has been giving advice and helping people improve their results since 2007. He has written a Free Online Dating Guide to help others find success with online dating. You can learn more about his personal experience using online dating and running this website here.
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